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Reflections

Missing image

Oh place me here,

no place me there.

wrinkles in my dress

furrow upon my brow,

tiny hands let me go,

I suffer so.

 

was an evil lass

a spell was cast,

forever to be,

Princess stickers

in the hands

of a  woman child.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • deamonfayrie
    March 29
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    cool

    i like the double use of the word reflections


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 27

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    Very unique take and quite unexpected.. I'm not too sure where you were going with this, but it is different.. Thank you so much for entering my first contest..


    • Rheea gold member
      February 28
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      I have two grand daughters =) princesses are every where!!!!
      age 2 and 4 we have stickers and books and the list is endless . I do not see fairies and princesses the way I use too . The 4 year old reads and makes up her own stories uses stickers to show the pictures.


  • quantumsurveyor
    February 27

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    My problem is the picture. She seems to be on ice - yet flowers cover the "water". I think you did a fascinating job here but not quite my cup of cocoa!!!


    • Rheea gold member
      February 27
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      It was satire lost in space grin. Donald my friend I have a riddle I shall send you.


  • Brazos silver member
    February 27

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    Oh, baby, it's you! So, the only time your wings may be seen is when you see them in your reflection...but it seems I see them all the time [and some horns, too, lol].

    You chose and described the pic very well; a fragile young woman whose image can be shattered so easily. Well done.

    I love you,
    Brazos


  • arafura gold member
    February 27
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    I like this. Great take on the prompt! Good luck in the contest.

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