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But why she turns paler in the darkness?


florets within the disc
  - a perfect geometric circle
yellow like the morning Sun
      attracts men’s eyes
tracing the direction of the light
she smiles the whole day.

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Sunflower

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    THIS IS lovely, it depicts a beautiful sunflower in her prime of nature, thank you for this entry,
    good luck
    mm