Lust
Hate
Passion
Power
Tears fall
Hearts bleed
Emptiness
Loneliness
Kill me
Save me
A wicked game
A sorrowful death
Fiery pits
consume my soul.
Save me from the pain.
Save me from the horror.
Release the blood from me.
I want it to be over.
Actions hurt
And so does Love
Let Cupid bleed
for once
I hate life
I hate lust
I hate God
I hate Love
Author notes
Difficult to read with the way it is laid out, but it's supposed to be chaotic.
Written in junior year, age 16.
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Comments
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its very interesting! i actually really love it!! it really is chaotic! and it fits the title prefectly!


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I like this one i enjoyed it's placement? ... umm the way it was riten... idk i just liked it.


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Hey this is cool. I love it. I love the way it's chaotic! Great job!






