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Chaos Thoughts

                            Lust
Hate
                                          Passion
              Power
                          Tears fall
Hearts bleed

                          Emptiness
Loneliness
                                        Kill me
                            Save me
A wicked game
                                                  A sorrowful death
                        Fiery pits
                                              consume my soul.

Save me from the pain.
                          Save me from the horror.
      Release the blood from me.
                                                  I want it to be over.

Actions hurt
                                              And so does Love
              Let Cupid bleed
                                            for once

      I hate life
                                            I hate lust
I hate God
                        I hate Love

Author notes

Difficult to read with the way it is laid out, but it's supposed to be chaotic.
Written in junior year, age 16.

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Comments

  • its very interesting! i actually really love it!! it really is chaotic! and it fits the title prefectly!

  • I like this one i enjoyed it's placement? ... umm the way it was riten... idk i just liked it.


  • zhaniswolf
    February 27
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    Hey this is cool. I love it. I love the way it's chaotic! Great job!