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Crazy kisses

Crazy kissin’ for a lark,
Just crazy kissin’ in the park,
Just crazy kissin’ crazy.

Sh-lur-py love kisses,
I wish she were my misses,
Here comes another one, shlurp plop!
“Try that little smacker on for size.”
You roll and blink your eyes,
You let me touch your inner thighs.
Then tugging at my hair,
You French kiss me back.
I need to catch a breath,
Before another heart attack.
Tongue delves in,
Flicking all about again,
Going backward north and south,
Caressin’ all around my mouth,
Those crazy, crazy kisses.

Chills running down my spine,
When you whisper you are mine,
As long as I can keep it up this time.
I’ve never felt so proud,
I love to tell the world out loud.
I love these crazy kisses
Love these crazy kisses in the park,
But wait with antici-pation,
For-after–dark!
  “muea-wa,”
“A little peck upon your perfect nose,”
It’s hard to find a guy,
That looks so good in ladies clothes,
Crazy kissin’
Crazy kissin’ in the park,
Crazy kissin’ after dark,
Just crazy kissin’ crazy.

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Written March 14th, 2002

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  • pen-inhand
    December 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    What a wonderful write. Shocked me into laughter! Kelly


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 14, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    crazy kissin i have been missing
    maybe cuz i was too hissing lol
    Cute i liked it
    Come read more of my stuff
    Left you anote on authors page
    Blessings
    Susan~~~~


  • August 11, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    mmm*uuu*aaa*hhh There's another crazy kiss for ya...lol A very funny one...I love it when they make me laugh...thanks!

    ~Gayla~


  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 7, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    muaaaaaahhhh..lol..love it..nice cute write...~~~GILL~~~


  • mona
    July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    lol beautiful


  • nell
    May 26, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    LOL an excellent piece!


  • May 18, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa - who's a funny bunny then

  • kaz4sim
    April 26, 2002
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    what a lovely crazy funny poem, and posted on my birthday too........ awwww pilo you are the best XX


  • April 14, 2002
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    Just hilarious pilo!
    HAHAhaha! those images are v.funny, as the words sink in more.
    Your one of the best to me,
    thanks pilo.


  • March 19, 2002
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    LOL that was just a blast to read:)


  • Maureen silver member
    March 15, 2002
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    A WILD AND CRAZY GUY!! Being crazy's lots of fun, just don't get caught...how fast can you run??? :o) Maureen x


  • birksy silver member
    March 15, 2002
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    Great poem, pilo. Bloody mad - but great fun! Thanks.

  • Highland Dreams
    March 14, 2002
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    MUUUUUUUUAAAAAAHHHHHH .... now I think I'll have another pint!

  • pilo
    March 14, 2002
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    Hello Citrus x Ah! crazy kissin' and cross dressin' what have I been missin' LOL
    Not the tune of knees up mother brown though. :o)

  • Citrus
    March 14, 2002
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    that was blooming crazy
    it made me feel quite hazy
    you been missin
    crazy kissin
    cross dressing in the park.......sung to the tune, Knees up mother brown.
    ah so british.......excellant.

  • pilo
    March 14, 2002
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    I'm glad you both liked my 'ditty', sung in the style of the London cockney pub song. :o)


  • Katilina
    March 14, 2002
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    LOL this was great, I bet you are on KRAZY GUY. ok anyways I dug the poem. Thanks.


  • kyew
    March 14, 2002
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    lol, what a sweet/funny poem... kinda chaotic but it worked for me... ;)

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