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patchwork

This is about the time when people are supposed to say,
"My whole life is coming together now," or at least wish it.

          I never thought Heaven would take my prayer so literally.

If this were a movie, I'd say, "I see my life flashing before my eyes,"
'cause all these soft scenes from forever are lying there ... waiting for me.

          I sit down and start patching,
          and all the gaping holes in my tattered life
          are closing up like so many flowers -

and I don't have to worry about falling through
the next time I take a step forward.
         
         

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  • Excellent! Very creative and cleverly penned indeed.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene