Saturn seems closer than last time I saw. But
then again, who am I to judge?
...
Only
the last being
on Earth.
[Isn't that
just about the simplest truth
you've ever heard?/
There was that plan
to make the whole world green -
a little tweaking here and there
to make everything better.
It went wrong.
[Isn't it obvious?]
The was one huge kaboom,
like so many thunderclouds
pounding in unison -
there was one huge wave
like so many ripples
squashed up into one -
there was one huge explosion
and everything - the whole shebang -
everything was gone.
Stagnant pools of water lie around and
weeds seem to thrive in this
desolate, barren world.
It needs a new name.
If it weren't blasphemy ... if it weren't
actually the worst place I could ever be [though it comes close] ...
if I had to rename this dead, burning planet
if it weren't blasphemy...
I'd call it Hell.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Go where the Picture takes you!! {2} by DinkyDiver.
800 points, ended March 12, 12 entries
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Comments
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Oohh a different take on it! Great job, intriguing! Lovely layout and lasting impression. Thankyou for entering! Xxx

