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The Trip Home

someone told me artistic merit and I laughed until my lungs bled.
no one ever believes me
but I don't let many try
I just want a honest to god love letter
and to wrap my legs around you
meld our bodies together to make me feel better
just skin, sweat and spit
I'm in love
damnit
notawhore
promise

remember?
yesterday

barely

just kiss me
that's all I'll ever ask for

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