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Belinda

The nerves choke you
Pulling you down
You fidget
Forcing your mind
To lead you somewhere
Somewhere far from where you are

Why?

I find myself wondering
At your actions
What do you fear?
Is it me?

My eyes stare intently
Wishing you wouldn't look away
Wishing I could enter that mind
And find what you fear
So that I can sooth your anxiety

You constantly look away
Blinking to block my access
I am at a loss of what to do

I wrap myself around you
And you don't seem to notice
The emotions I gather up are deep
Full of pain
I keep probing for something
But all I feel is nausea
I must pull away

Someday
I will figure you out

Author notes

I want to be able to explain this, but I can't. This did actually happen. I kinda channeled my empathy towards one girl. I know she isn't specifically afraid of me, though I felt she was hiding something very painful.

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  • Little Blue Bird
    February 28, 2009

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    WOW

    You have no idea how much this sounds like my roomate. and you won't believe this but her name is Belinda.
    Awesome write, very heartfelt and.... well I am at a lose for words. Good job keep up the good work.