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Embracing Life As It Is

embracing life as it is
no regrets
continue to go forward
listen...
beyond the silence
align yourself with that mystery
listen to your spirit
allow your dreams to live
find what makes life worth living
then fulfill what needs to be
look beyond  the logic
know within that knowing
where wisdom tells the tale
that truth within
and aspire to be what you can.

Feb. 26, 2009

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  • RenaissanceGirl
    May 2, 2009

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    Short, simple and yet...the most respectable truth I've heard from poetry in awhile. Uplifting & a great write! Good job

    -E


  • twisted prince
    March 1, 2009
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    good job

    yep life is easier when U accept it


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    I like it the way it is sidey! I don't see where it needs revision at all, but then I'm not the author. The entire piece should be a testament to peoples everywhere to listen within themselves and allow their dreams to live. I could quote your entire piece here as I rant on, but suffice it to say that your last line tells it all..."aspire to be what you can." I love it! Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Lily ♥


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 26, 2009
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    challenging