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Love Story

He's annoying obnoxious,
Loud and shy,
Some love him some hate him
But he's my kind of guy,
With his shyness, his loudness,
His beautiful blue eyes,
He's oh so lovely,
Standing next to those other guys,

I gripe and I yell,
But I cant stay mad long,
When he makes me laugh,
And sticks out his tongue,

He comes to me
And talks so very sweet,
Then he makes me smile,
When he tries to look neat,

He loves to hug, loves to kiss,
He always says I Love You,

And says I was greatly missed,

He holds my hand
When we cross the street,
And crawls into my bed
When he has a bad dream,

Who is this handsome,
Charming young man?
He is my brother,
And I want no other.

A contest entry

Prompt 2) Love Story By: Taylor Swift

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  • Wow, that was a curve ball you threw at the end of that poem. That was truly a great poem, i enjoyed it.

    kaycee

    ps. best of luck in the contest.

  • aww! omg this was amazing! i thought it was beautiful! you did a good job on this piece. the emotions were great and powerful, and brought the piece to life. it brought tears to my eyes thinking about this, how some people are lucky enough to find their true someone; their other half. the imagery in this was very vivid and something that took my breath away. keep up the good work! thanks for entering!