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Voices

Voices in my head
Telling me to run away
Wondering just how many
People will hurt me
On the way
All these lies built up
Forcing me to fakely smile
Voices in my head
Telling me i can't stay
Warning me taht "i love you"
Is simply just a game.

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  • wiltedvamp18
    March 12
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    aww

    wow thats amazing!
    Forever and always,
    ecliper

  • yes, unfortunatley it would seem that love is just a game for some people