When I find you...

When I find you will you know me
Will your heart race or miss a beat
Do you think that you will love me
From my head down to my feet

When I hold your hand the first time
Do you think you'll feel just fine
I hope it makes you feel much more
Are you floating on cloud nine

I know Im only dreaming its all inside my head
I really wish that it was true and you loved me instead
Im not the guy I used to be back in the good old days
But you know Im still a decent man still got my loving ways

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Life is a Beach
February 26, 2009

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I concur with sunshine girl...you are a great guy! And what is the good old days? Wisdom and knowledge come with age and that's just sexier than anything! Nice write.

StarEyes
February 26, 2009

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Dad,

What a read this one is! I love it! And I think you will know, as well as they will know! How can they not know? You are a great guy!

and love

Nyetta

right now

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