Love
is a declaration
that we give to others
showing that we shall
treat them equally-
if not better than you treat yourself.
(According to ones personal ability)
The world would be a better place
if we all practiced and expressed
unselfish love for others.
But it is hard to do when
the media promotes
vengeance
and greed.
Author notes
So much suffering can be avoided but
so many people love violence and money.
@};---k
Originally written: On Feb 26 6:45 PM
date updated for new views.
A contest entry
- What is love to you by Sunshine Princess.
650 points, ended February 27, 2009, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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sure its a good poem
like this poem... and sure its as deep and meaningful as your soul which is unseen but felt by me...
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Thats some true stuff
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thank you for the comment Tony.
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I really lik it
its my third time I am reading and appreciating...wowo... what a style of your\s doing this impressive way... you seem soo intelligent and kind heated but litle scary for nothing...I am waiting to be added from your side in facebook and other sites with your sweet words... -
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no point, i opened a facebook to see what you were doing there, thing is I don't know what I'm doing...
so, I think I'll cancel it.
I have no style in poetry, just whatever I feel like doing is what I do,
I've told others I like essay's and story/journal form most but I don't post any of it here.
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really a good poem
love this poem too..very rich by theme and done the sweet rhythmic way ...meaningful indeed... you really are a good poetess... best of luck -
I liked your poem I think it is true that love can change lots of bad things in this world thank you writing for my contest
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Good write. I am not sure if it is suited for this age group, but it is an amazing poem non-the-less. Good luck in the contest.
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I didn't think of that.......
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