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Welcome To Hell

 

 

Come on in and feel my pain

I welcome you with disdain

And hatred, only the loneliness

Will comfort you as the

Darkness beckons for you to

Join the march of madness

 

No need to cry or whine for

You won't find sympathy here

But laughter to mock your

Weakness and wreck the hope

That you wish for but eludes you

As you sleep away the ever

Disgracing insanity

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  • Andrea Claire
    June 2

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    Such vivid imagery here... I've been to this place you speak of, (there and back, in fact) and your description is hauntingly accurate! Love your intensity in this piece.


  • BrokenSanity
    May 31

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    Powerful poem, here. Lol to the fact it's the sme title to mine. COMPLETE coincidence, I assure you. I liked this, interesting how we both interpretate the title.


  • MysteriousWhisper
    April 1

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    that is pretty good rhyming and even though i don't particularly like rhyming you did a good job. I liked the theme of the poem as well. flowed really well. good luck in the contest.


  • hks
    February 26
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    do u like tool?

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