Let me be apart
of your world,
in a realm of
uncharted stars
Come into my arms
and let's rediscover
love again,
in a sphere of mystery
Take the steering wheel
of fate my darling,
and coast across the
galaxies of my devotion
Leave behind distorted
memories of heartbreak,
imagine a world of
endless possibilities
A place where you and I
can be together,
without the chains of the
past weighing on our dreams
The universe is like one
big continuous ocean,
come with me and let us
sail the seven sea's
I'll be your first mate
of intimacy,
give the order captain
of my destiny
All aboard, for its
time to sail,
on the ship of love
and happily ever after
Just you and I
entwined in ecstasy,
amidst a universe of
never ending wishes
Author notes
See link below for poem inspiration
2. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rKlaV-9Vzsk&feature=channel_page
A contest entry
- Star Sailor - Come sail your ships around me by Suzanne Dia.
3000 points, ended March 11, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the images you have put in this. So many beautiful ones. A lovely write indeed.
Best wishes in ths contest.
Gaylene
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Hummz, put some more images in it
otherwise fine work
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/We+Are+Against+Every+Blood+Traitor+of+Humanity
bythe poet of hearts and beautiful words
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FABULOUS WRITE!!
Just you and I entwined in ecstasy!!
I also like......Leave behind distorted memories of heartbreak.
Your words are soooooo well put together.
This is a keeper. I really like this.
Good luck on this one!
Steffany
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FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my goodness! This is crazy. I love the "out to sea" aspect of this piece. This is amazing. I'm speechless. Every day, dude? You come with FIRE, every day? That is crazy. A lot of people need to get on your level. LOL. Great write. - cgirl0410
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excellent
what a terrific journey you created with your words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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very appropriately titled. this is truly beautiful. i did, however, catch something you may want to fix:
Let me be apart
a part
thank you for sharing this with me today. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered and am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. unfortunately, i do not have the points to give this the applause it is due. viyanna rosemarie
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im there!!!
take me away darling take me away! i love it...how loving how wonderfully written! thanks for sharing!!
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