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Creative Process

Cigarette ash tumbles
staining grey onto my hand.
Burning embers ache in my
head, burning into
unwritten ideas
of soon to be poetry.

A contest entry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    WELL you stated this to facts,poetry is always effective in everything we do,even smoking, thank you for this entry...good luck
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  • penman gold member
    February 26, 2009
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great word choice. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 26, 2009

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    this is a good write from you and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. thank you for sharing this and i wish you well in the contest we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie