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beauty's inhalation

Missing image
Inhabiting the soul,
lies transfiguration;
its elegance, unspeakable
and its grace sublime
for metamorphosis and its pain
create beauty’s inhalation

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i am currently in drug rehabilitation classes. the work we do in there is often painful but the resulting recovery is worth the pain.

thank you for reading me

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    February 27, 2009
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    Beautiful expression of words.

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    WELL

    congratulations on turning the milestone to a place where you will succeed in rehab, as hard as it is, you will appreciate the work in the classes.thank you for this entry...good luck
    MM