I soar through the wind
I soar through the sky
The great bright sun waves in my face
I feel like the sun is saying hi to me
I bring down my wings
as I float to the ground
When I come inside
I feel a desparate cool
I say brrrr...
Then, when I reach the bottom of the stairs
The wind hits me with a sudden chill
As I walk to the TV
I feel my rash heating up
I turn the TV on
I'm as warm as fire
Author notes
Thanks Grandma for helping me type this out and get around on this poetry site.
What did you think
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fabulous poetry!
it reminds us all of the joy of watching Saturday
morning cartoons..I had to race to the TV..
...before my three brothers to get the show I wanted
to see....with a big of cheerioos by my side!
keep up the great writing!
ears2hearyou/Granny Kathleen/Seattle
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Another very nice poem
You're off to a great start as a poet. I hope to see much more of your poetry soon.
Just keep up the good work
Dee
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:-) Dear Nasir,
if you are as awesome as your grandma then you will go extremely far!!! :-) wonderful poem dear poet. -
I turn the TV on
I'm as warm as fire" very nice closing dear Nasir. well done. I am 'ceegeeess' at A.P. I am a friend of your Grandma!wish you become a great thinker and poet .wish you all the best.
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You are welcome dear grandson!
Granny misses you and your mom even though you've only been gone for the past 48 hours. I hope you're having a ball at Disney World. I wish I could have come with you.
This poem is a wonderful natural work of poetry. You keep up the good work my dearest!
I LOVE YOU ♥
Granny
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for TEN!!!
for ten this is really well written
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