Little shimmers suspended in time,
refreshing,
renewing.
Soon just memories,
glimmering aqua,
the elixir of life.
Catching,
holding,
reflecting hope.
Author notes
20-50words Prompt: broken in aqua shimmers
A contest entry
- Quickie-Pif-10poets by luna-midnight.
900 points, ended February 26, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent. I love the beginning and how it flows. Great job.
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Awesome poem! I like how you have one word in one line and so on. "glimmering auqa", I like how you didn't say "water". Aqua just made it ten times better. Great write
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Ohhhh I love this!!! It makes me think of how much you make me smile... Those little shimmers!! Good write sis
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I love the ending. So simple and it flows so smoothly and perfectly. Awesome write, good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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i haven't seen the prompt, but I really like the last 3 lines in this... I see a child bending over and looking into water...
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a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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i like this, it flows very well, and is beautiful. the ending of hope. nicely done, and thanks for entering, take care
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Thank you dear... I'm glad you like it..
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