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watching through rejected eyes
the grieving of this place
no hope for demise...
just cold embrace

watching you walk away~
was like being killed

~over and over again~

Now i stand alone
I will remain unknown
Your judging eyes
Will ignore my cries

until i fade to nothing


{Chourus}
the spinning lies of yesterdays tears
knowing that reality isn't as it appears
dissapointment numbing the fears
screaming inside ~ you know no one hears

~Crashing through the stars, remembering the scars~

              ~Clinging to my Dreams of death~
{end of chourus}


The things i wish I could do
To kill the pain
So many times i've wondered
How much bitterness i can contain

~The numbness just spreads~

Taking for granted
Everything torn in two
Fading slowly away
Dissapointment bleeding through

tell me the truth.

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  • This was absolutely incredible?
    YES. IT WAS. <3


  • xXRawerxX
    February 27

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    Wow, i seriously love this. Somehow i can relate to this. Its just deep and full of emotion, i love the first line, it really made me want to keep reading it. Altogether kick ass job!! =] (BTW-bookmarkingthis if its ok?)

  • FallingRainDrop
    February 26

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    this is such a good start. i really enjoyed it. you got natural talent! i love the line "the spinning lies of yesterdays tears" that was really amazing. love it! :]