watching through rejected eyes
the grieving of this place
no hope for demise...
just cold embrace
watching you walk away~
was like being killed
~over and over again~
Now i stand alone
I will remain unknown
Your judging eyes
Will ignore my cries
until i fade to nothing
{Chourus}
the spinning lies of yesterdays tears
knowing that reality isn't as it appears
dissapointment numbing the fears
screaming inside ~ you know no one hears
~Crashing through the stars, remembering the scars~
~Clinging to my Dreams of death~
{end of chourus}
The things i wish I could do
To kill the pain
So many times i've wondered
How much bitterness i can contain
~The numbness just spreads~
Taking for granted
Everything torn in two
Fading slowly away
Dissapointment bleeding through
tell me the truth.
Comments
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This was absolutely incredible?
YES. IT WAS. <3
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Wow, i seriously love this. Somehow i can relate to this. Its just deep and full of emotion, i love the first line, it really made me want to keep reading it. Altogether kick ass job!! =] (BTW-bookmarkingthis if its ok?)


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this is such a good start. i really enjoyed it. you got natural talent! i love the line "the spinning lies of yesterdays tears" that was really amazing. love it! :]




