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Blink

She peers into my soul

with deep pools of aqua ~
inhibitions forgotten,
with a blink, I am taken...

Tensions build within me,

begging for release,
to swim deep in her ocean!

She blinks again,
and I awaken flustered...


A shiver moves down my spine

...as she smiles and walks on.

 

 

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Broken In Aqua Shimmers
20-50 Words

A contest entry

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  • maralisa silver member
    February 26, 2009
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 26, 2009

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    this is intresting, i really like it. its different. thanks for entering, and good luck. take care
    Stephanie ♥