Reflections of seashells danced
the waves moved
untouched by beauty
in that moment I realized
we are all being used
years from now
earth will have the last laugh
as maggots feast on us
in death we'll remain
torn
untouched by grace
Author notes
broken in aqua shimmers
A contest entry
- Quickie-Pif-10poets by luna-midnight.
900 points, ended February 26, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
"Reading without reflecting is like eating without digesting."
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Wow..
This is beautiful..
Enjoyed it.
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Very deep/ A little disturbing, but only on the surface. It is one of those writes that causes that little battle between overblown ego and insignificance. I enjoyed the read.
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I love this, it starts out so beautiful and then turns on us...kinda like what we've done to it. Wonderful write, congrats on the silver!!
wyattxxx
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haha, wow, this is so different, i love it, i laughed, i love how you twsited it, great job and thanks
Stephanie ♥ -
a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa
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