Seldom are you alone
With fairies all around
In yonder hills of lilac blue
Where dreams do so abound
Forever still is but a word
Time moves within your heart
To smell the scent of untamed hair
With a dream like magic part
Exactly then what is real
Your soul demands to know
Yet with a child's seeing eyes
You see the enchantments glow
The world that is made of man
And they that let you down
Are banished quickly from you mind
In this fabled fairy town
Author notes
Option 1, and I hope I did this according to the rules
A contest entry
- Options Galore, Well a few anyhow to use your imaginations!!! xx by hearts blossoms.
850 points, ended March 6, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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HOOD-WINK!!!
What a lovely piece of poetry this is. It flows like a soft breeze on a Summers morn. Just beautiful.
You've been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit.
~Titia~
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This is so delightful my friend. Hugs and Smiles. Blessing and love being sent to you from me.
Peace, Sandy
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Once again you mesmerize with your words.
This is something that every child and adult would enjoy.
The rythm and flow is as perfect as your rhyme.
Excellent job!
Love and Blessings
Nicole
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i loved this, the rhyme is so mellow and flawlessly natruqal so the whole flow is smooth, the poem is so enchanting and you used the option very well, i was havin trouble to get the next line but you managed it well, a lovley fantasy tale
well done
abigail
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