Lips that kiss with sweet sanguine notes
upon the heart,
their succulent claret stains of fire
blazing so deep inside.
Igniting our sky with ruby dreams,
a poetic moment wishing it would last forever,
but it like any verse it ended,
we were another seasonal stanza
of passion fruit.
Author notes
49 words
Prompt:
~ "Lipstick has a way of leaving more than just a mark on my sheets,
coloring my senses cherry red; at least for this week...
Kisses under starry night skies, talked about in song,
we play along, so bitter sweet by our design.
I'm sick and tired of writing songs about you,
This is it, this is the end..." ~
The Girl's A Straight Up Hustler - All Time Low.
A contest entry
- Quickieee...Cause its been a while :) by Ghetto Superstar..
400 points, ended March 18, 2009, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations on winning the Gold. This is simply beautiful and a fitting take on the prompt. Well done!
Mariana
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Wow the words you used in this are just wonderful. This sounded a bit like a fruit salad of passion that ended
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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My Dearest Brother,
What a great job you did on this one. I love your take on the prompt! This is great!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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A flowing creative write...taking the prompt excellently with great imagery and passion in your words....Good luck with the contest...Know you will do well...
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a fantastic take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa
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Very attractive poem. Hehe
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wonderful.
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Woah such imagery and a wonderful flow an excellent write poet
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