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BG - Spring For Children


Natures Quest

 

A slim breeze trembles
through mirrored shades of green.
Suspended in tranquility,
Where echos whisper unseen.

Dew drops iridescent shimmer,
prisms descending to dry ground.
Wrapped in lightly fragrant air,
where heavenly blooms are found.

Seeping through the soil.
tickling twisted roots.
Bestowing life much needed,
to conceive brand new shoots.

Searching out the murky flow,
of a pebble encrusted creek.
Trail to aquamarine waves,
high seas, that it does seek.

Under flaming crimson glow,
dancing upon silver crests.
Reabsorbing the moisture,
nature's infinite quest.

 

 

Author notes

Children's spring BG. As for the poem *cringe* it was the only one I could find that had anything to do with spring, it was written a long time ago before I found the darker side of poetry..lol.

BG set at 185, credit appreciated

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Comments

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  • Aww... I think the poem is just lovely!! Definitely not dark but beautiful work hunny... and the background is cute!!!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 27

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    The border with it's bright colors is sweet, as is the Easter tissue wrap. works with the spring poem well, a nice "Ode" to spring.


  • rbruce gold member
    February 26

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    Your expressed sentiments of spring are quite lovely.
    Maybe an edit will bring the peom up to date with yourself as you are now, not as you were when you originally wrote it. For mine, I enjoyed the read anyway.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    February 26

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    First of all !!!
    *jaw hanging slightly agape*
    The poem is just so beautiful
    it should be on a hallmark card.!
    Awesome write!
    Love the bg too

    ~Pastel


  • maralisa silver member
    February 26

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    aw wow hun a fantastic poem and background good luck in the contestmaralisa

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