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Lip Reading

A single kiss
silenced her questions' dialect,
forgetting doubt’s language
with help of love’s interpreter.

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15 words
prompt: lost in translation

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  • Whyitt U
    February 27, 2009

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    wonderful take on the prompt, put a smile on my lips just reading it...."love's interpreter"....I love that phrase! Excellent and well deserving of the trophy.

    wyattxxx


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    Yes, get what you mean! Vivid images of your words, convince us you are so right! Glad you got a silver... You deserved it!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 26, 2009

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    I did enjoy this so much. Congratulations on your beautiful trophy. Well done. ~Pamela


  • maralisa silver member
    February 26, 2009
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    wonderful this is fantastic good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • going nowhere
    February 26, 2009

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    perfect... talk about putting a smile on my face! i really liked this. so many times i can just mess things up when i talk ... thank you for your entry.

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