Wearing shades of black,
hiding affectionate eyes,
which speak volumes
to those who love him.
A master of words,
such creativity and fun,
of beauty and tenderness,
captivating his audiences
in his modest ways.
No one can compete,
genuineness and friendship,
given freely with no strings;
a pillar of strength to support,
during the worst of times,
but never asking for himself.
Like a fine wine he ages,
only increasing in value
to the connoisseurs of taste.
As you approach another year,
I hold my hand up to you,
my Swan, my dear friend,
and drink a toast in your honor.
In a list
A contest entry
- Birthday Wishes for Swangrnv by geckogirl.
2400 points, ended March 8, 2009, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Birthdays by SlowlyBreathing.
900 points, ended October 13, 2009, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i have no idea how it is that my comment didn't take, but honestly my dear sweet lady i've read this(more than once!) and i thought absolutely for sure that i left a comment!! i'm so sorry it didn't seem to take..well anyays just so you know..THIS IS GOLD, AS FAR AS I'M CONCERNED!! thank you baby, i'm very touched..
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I like the 'find wine' comparison.
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An excellent dedication to a swell (swollen headed...haha) guy. Just a little joke there; yeah, I know this guy too. I had the misfortune though, of seeing him without the shades (LOL...KIDDING again...he's my real life brother).
AsIThink...
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lovely!
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In honor of a dear friends birthday.. thanks so much, I am sure he will love it. thanks for entering..
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Very nice. It sounds like a great dedication to from a friend and a fan.
Mike
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