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t r a n s l a t i o n

Traversing
Reality,
Answers
Need
Sublimity.
Love;
Anger;
Trepidation;
Ignorance;
Obliberated,
Neverending

lost in translation

Author notes

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In a list

A contest entry

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    February 27

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    Superb

    I quite like your Bare Bones Poem, just as it is.
    Nice to see someone else writing in this format.
    Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • Well done. I like acrostics but I am not very good at them. I enjoyed this very simple poem alot.

    Mike

  • Invisible Mime
    February 26
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    "lost is translation" <--awesome.
    Sweet, this rocks. I like the words you chose for the acrostic..and the way you did the title.


  • going nowhere
    February 26
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    very nice, in acrostic form... and not only that, using single words per line. you make something that is hard to do look easy. answers to so many things need a clarity that seems to.. like you said.. be only set upon a skewed reality. not sure if you mean obliterated at the end there... but destruction does seem to be neverending. thanks for your entry.