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Here comes baby giggler

Here comes baby giggler
I think ill hug her tight
I think I ‘beta’ tickle her
Ill make her laugh all night

Here comes baby giggler
Crying, moaning on and on
I think I ‘beta’ feed her
So her happy heart can run

Here comes baby giggler
Playing with her teddy bear
I think I will creep up behind her
And give her a big scare

Here comes baby giggler
Giggling on the floor
She’s a baby wriggler
wriggling and giggling is her law

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This poem is if it's a girl (Awww you're an aunty )

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  • pop123
    March 9, 2009

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    Nice poem, cute.
    Dont scare the poor baby though, it'll scare the daylights out of her.
    Awesome.


  • I will stand by you
    March 3, 2009
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    this is a great wirte. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • cupcakealia
    February 28, 2009
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    Babies are so cute!!!


  • BellaAmare
    February 26, 2009
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    Amazing job.

    Very good.
    It sounds very professional.