This became today
a missed chance and now
we have become, not part
of a cure, but just another
disease.
Author notes
prompt is
Singin, come out upon my seas
Curse missed opportunities
Am I, a part of the cure
Or am I part of the disease"
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Comments
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This is so beautiful and it makes so much sence to me, well penned my friend


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great take overall great work
amazing work
wow work


