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Upward Spiral

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Spiraling upward
Toward the Heavenly Realm
Reaching for God’s Light

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Image: http://izdes.deviantart.com/art/Infinity-113557445

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  • SilverWolf
    March 28, 2009
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    Wow!!!! That was SOO awesome!!!
    The picture totally makes the poem much more awesome but the poem itself is like this big WOW!
    Drove that point home! Woo! People out there, favorite this girl, for one shes my Mom and two shes like the most awesomest person and poet on planet earth!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 6, 2009

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    Impressive. Divine. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. I'm honored to have you show your work here.


  • drifting cloud silver member
    February 27, 2009
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    Good imagery.


  • Broken-Rickie
    February 27, 2009

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    nice job babe.


  • dame de la riviere
    February 26, 2009

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    Yay, someone writing Haiku who actually pays attention to how it's supposed to be written! A nice change. And another cheer for spring!
    Glad you're writing/posting. , Dannie


  • Lactar Wolfgang
    February 26, 2009
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    wow

    i like the poem alot simple but oh so powerful. you rock


    • Jaded Lily gold member
      February 26, 2009
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      Thank you for such a raving review of my little haiku. You rock for leaving such a great comment Lactar!

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