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Angel Guide heart

We could walk mile for mile,
always remain apart
burning love we share
will light path to our hearts.

Angels song guide you
one day our paths may cross
doves of heaven ignite, blue.
so you would not get lost.

In my arms I'd hold tight
part of me I once lost
I never gave up the fight
no matter the cost.

See smile upon your face
catch up on time past
healing of your warm grace
together again at long last.

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  • SoulWhispher
    February 26

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    Wow, this is a fanatastic love poem, you have really done a most wonderfull job here, I am glad to see you writing once more, I have missed you moving poetry, Love John