Moist heat infuses,
ascension to another plane;
breath quickens, blood pounds,
lips gentle, supple massage,
pleasure sends mind reeling,
love flows, driving passions.
Author notes
Option Chosen: 11. Kiss - Describe to me in less than 25 words, how a kiss feels. This should be a beautiful, but moderately hard task. Or at least if you do it right.
Layout on purpose, just a stylistic choice.
23 written words.
A contest entry
- x She's Just a Delicate DisasteR x by xxRainbowDawnxx.
750 points, ended March 6, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awww beautiful, this reminds me of one of those kisses that you have wanted to do for ages, but never could and now you have the chance to and you savour it, so much so you can taste them. Nicely wrote.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my kiss lol
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