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The Most Sensual Massage

Moist heat infuses,
ascension to another plane;

      breath quickens, blood pounds,
      lips gentle, supple massage,

              pleasure sends mind reeling,
              love flows, driving passions.


Author notes

Option Chosen: 11. Kiss - Describe to me in less than 25 words, how a kiss feels. This should be a beautiful, but moderately hard task. Or at least if you do it right.

Layout on purpose, just a stylistic choice.

23 written words.


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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 6

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    Awww beautiful, this reminds me of one of those kisses that you have wanted to do for ages, but never could and now you have the chance to and you savour it, so much so you can taste them. Nicely wrote.