Heavy heart spills
inked stains of yesterday,
smearing thoughts into syllables
of uncertainty
ailing within a storm
of unfocused devastations
striking the soul;
my breath leaves me…
without a sigh,
a down pour of
rain, saturates sorrow;
submerging all spirit
into the depths
of unknown
as a river bed forms
a dissimilar tomorrow,
flickers of light
shine upon this shadowy flow
of murky currents
yet adrift, once again
upon a solitude
of weary
only memories of you
have delayed the
inevitable~
Author notes
Picture: http://media.photobucket.com/image/rose%20in%20water/Chrmdtilldeth/3.jpg?o=14
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Very Good
adrift, once again
upon a solitude
of weary
only memories of you
have delayed the inevitable~
This is very beautiful and yet sad
Wonderful crafting of words
Rick
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Why thank you for such a wonderful compliment on my poetry!!!
Love your AP name!!!
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nice imagery, descritpive.flows.
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Thank you
How wonderful of you to stop by and read my poetry! Always a pleasure to hear another poets thoughts on my work!
Jasminerose
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beautiful pic and the accompaning words add to the beauty... written with your soft quill as usual..
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This has a wonderful flow, and expresses the poet's thoughts with strong emotion. Very well done.
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Thank you for the lovely comment!!
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Aw...a deep write.
Well-expressed, my friend.
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Thank you friend
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One of the few poets i can enjoy reading without wishing for rhyme.I can think of no better compliment to pay Excellent
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Dear Legend, your thoughtful and complimnetary comment has lifted my spirits to smile.... thank you for such a lovely comment!!!
Linda
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First i fell in love with the title, and knew it had to be an awesome piece of poetry, and I was right. This is amazing. Emotion and intense and deep all rolled into one outstanding poem. The picture goes well with this piece.
Justgot2loveme
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Thank you so much for the very lovely comment on my poem. It is always wonderful to hear your thoughts on my peotry...and I am so delighted you enjoyed this... your comment has brought a smile to my face
Linda
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You are indeed a beautiful poet.. this is deep and intense..wonderfully written. The lines:
ailing within a storm
of unfocused devastations
striking the soul;
my breath leaves me…
grabbed hard. Great stuff!
Linda
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Thank you sweet Linda for the very lovely comment on my poem ! It is always wonderful to hear your thoughts on my poetry as they always bring a smile to my heart!
Thank you
Linda
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ooops need to add this to my new list of brilliant poems by brilliant poets of mine
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awwww thanks BFF
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This is so deep ....like the river you pen of...heart spilling poetry to seep into the soul from yours.....Sigh~....Thanks Bff....I needed a good cry whether I wanted it or not
Thank your muse for me for being brilliant ♥
Lynda
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Hi Lynda,
I am not sure if I should say sorry for the cry or not???
lol so I will just say, I am very delighted this moved your heart so...
as always, thank you my bff for leaving such a beautiful compliment on my poem!!
Jazzy
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