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thorn forests

I glance at the young solidiers left and right, out on the battlefield thier doom Awaits the comes we charge shouting at the top of our lungs

Instantly many of my friends are cut down 

In the tangle of thorns

In sheer panic I hack at the stems of the plant but no matter how many I cut

More grow

Before my eyes

filling the swathes of destruction we wreak

An impenetrable barrier of curved plants'teeth

Slashing through

The bodies of my friends

A sudden pain and I realise I shall never see another morning

as my berry red blood slowly seeps into the soil

I think 'what madness is this'

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