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Kisses

 

 

 

 

 

 

Saturn's rings can not compare
with the diamond dusted orbs
as eyes glisten under the twinkling canvas
of night when our lips join as one.

Eons from now they will still
be speaking of that one magical
kiss that filled the senses of all
around us that fateful night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

"Kisses under starry night skies, talked about in song,"

The Girl's A Straight Up Hustler - All Time Low.

10 Poets.
30-50 Words.

I used 49 words

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  • penman gold member
    February 26
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. great creation for the contest. Best of luck

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    February 26
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    Riftkin: love the magical eternal feel.

    Good luck in the contest..

    Lady D


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 26
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    Wow that is so beautiful, auntie.