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Tapestry

Ancestral tapestry,
with thy vivid, vibrant colors ~
blood-lines, family ties,
thy fibers art in mine soul.

From dawn's beginning,
thou hast formed who I am --

but if there be any blemish,
any family curse,


    I rend thee now

...and create my tapestry anew.

 

 

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 4

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    Oh I love this! A brilliant take on the prompt. This really got my attention! How unique and creative!
    Thank you so much for your entry.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    March 2

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    I love your style..so refreshing and brilliant. Wonderful take on the prompt and I wish you all the luck.


  • Soft-Rain
    February 26

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    Well done a great work of art. The title is perfect also! Beautiful!


  • maralisa silver member
    February 26
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    a sreat poem so of depth throughout good luck contestmaralisa


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    February 26

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    Well written and crafted. I really loved how this flowed so perfectly. well done indeed

    -deadly

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