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She Hides

She hides from the world in solitude and twilight
She hides from herself in alcohol
She believes that love is a prelude to a heartache
She does not trust happiness at all
She hides, she hides
She hides from the sun in rendezvous at midnight
She hides her heart away behind a wall
She believes that joy is meant for only one night
She is always gone before the dawn
She hides, she hides
And she is everything that this insane man ever wanted
And she is everything that I don't need
And she is midnight blue and she shines like a diamond
And she is never gonna be for me
She hides, she hides
She hides from reality in fantasies of starlight
She hides away from starlight in her room
She colors her past with sugar coated memories
Of yesterday when life was not so cruel
She hides, she hides
She hides from her pain with painted smiles and laughter
She hides her real self in her cocoon
She cannot be touched any deeper than the outside
She threw her heart away so long ago
She hides, she hides
And she is everything that this insane man ever wanted
And she is everything that I don't need
And she is midnight blue and she shines like a diamond
And she is never gonna be for me

chael 09



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  • Emotionally charged. The ending line packs a punch...like a moth to a flame...thanks you so much for the entry!


    Azlyn

  • Wow this is intence, I can kinda relate to this actually really good poem. Thank you so much for entering this contest and I wish you the best of luck.

  • Reason your poem wasn't put in the finals: This was a very good poem, But not exactly what I was looking for. I wanted something a little more blunt and X rated

  • Interesting.....no comments till judgement