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Morning's Sweet Song 2

Gurgle gurgle gurgle
The dish washer sings
Gurgle gurgle gurgle
Going off with a DING!

Drip drip drip
Coffee slowly falls
Drip drip drip
The morning starts to call

Crinkle crinkle flip
The paper's on Dad's belly
Crinkle crinkle flip
So now it's pretty smelly.

Beep beep beep!
Sleep: fantastic.
Beep beep beep!
Alarms: too drastic.

Shhhh pshpsh shhhhh
Ironing keeps Mom busy
Shhhh pshpsh shhhhh
But it really makes ME tizzy!

Crunch crunch crunch
Mouth open - how rude.
Crunch crunch crunch
See? Food!

Gurgle gurgle drip drip
Crinkle crinkle beep!
Flip crunch pshpsh
Gurgle shlurp-shlurp shhhh

Gurgle gurgle drip drip
Crinkle crinkle beep!
Flip crunch pshpsh
Gurgle shlurp-shlurp MADNESS!!

Author notes

Hello! I found this contest and thought it was absolutely adorable. I had a cute, up-beat poem but there were a few things that wouldn't be best for kids ("Murder! Money! Madness! The news anchor screams." ect.). So I shortened it a bit by taking those things out (that's where the '2' comes in in this title). I don't know if this is a bed time poem, but I think children would ejoy it =D I wish the best to your sister and her baby!

And welcome to my morning.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • theVIP
    April 26
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    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

    I think it's great