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O Mistress Mine

Lace trails up these creamy stems of a black rose
Stained red bloom atop this elegent goddess' face
Let her snow white fingers grace your lips
And allow your cheek against her boot, cry "Thank You, Mistress"
Allow her to pick you up and embrace you tenderly as you stroke her face
"O Mistress Mine....Where are you going?"
Her twinkling azure pearls flutter a kiss to you while she purs,
"To love another, but you can kiss my boots once more before you leave"

Tricky mistress, let me be yours once more,
Only yours.

~

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  • Nymphetemine
    March 3

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    This is a very sensual poem.. I love the mistress and the licking of her boots.. Looovvvveelly..lol
    Makes me tingle inside. Wonderfully written dear poet..
    Love and Light AngelofLight


  • LucyLightning
    February 27

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    OOOO.
    This was really ... wow.

    I loved the imagery in it.
    I was listening to A Little Piece Of Heaven by A7x,
    perfect song to read with this. lol.


  • Angelflower
    February 26

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    This was really really well written.. I love the concept of this write.. you really did such a wonderful job with this picture.. thank you very much for your entry, best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • L.Jay
    February 26
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    i liked this alot. very descriptive.


  • crimsondew
    February 26

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    The 'mistress' essence is caught really well..Good iamgeyr too dear..and you wrote thsi really fast, if I am right...All the best in the contest my fairy!

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