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The Luck Within You

luck is
within you
look deep
And you will see

A contest entry

Say what you want it will be looked at if i can but it is not going to hurt my feelings if its bad.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 26

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    oH i SAW

    I saw, so much leaving and not enough clinking lol...but it's all in fun, thank you for this entry, good luck too
    MM