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Beautiful butterfly

Beautiful butterfly, radiant blue as you personify daylight
Sunshine, your kindness levitated me into joyful flight
Compassion, like you show is the trademark of kind souls
Understanding, you are busy turning my pieces into wholes

Discovering my sores, yet leaving me complete in my worth
Somehow, I believe our souls met on the day of my birth
Friendship, you being the sand that filtrates to clear my murkiness
Radiant, those around you illuminate for your glow is timeless

Beautiful butterfly, you spread your colors over me
Revealing, that there is more to me than what I could see
This poem, is just my way to say that I appreciate your love
Angel, God must really be missing your presence in the Above…

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  • Stardust-luvr
    February 28

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    when I started reading your write it made me think of the following site about the symbolism of butterflies -- hope you enjoy -- http://www.vlinder-01.dds.nl/butterfly_symbolism.htm As the love that speaks from your heart through your words to bring life aloft on the wings of love to flit with eternal hope and peace embracing the light that luminates the soul with lasting promise. True love brings forth memories that will be cherished and treasured evermore left unforgotten in the heart well done and thank you for entering, many blessings always xxx