Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Just East Of A King Sized Bed.

Three sets of drawers,
yet only one entices me,
Three handles too
but only one
that she can pull on...
and find bliss.

This moment suspended
like crystal balls,
fragile, delicate,
like tongues dancing
to an age old waltz,
playing over and over again.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis

Author notes

Credit photo to-http:/indospan.deviantart.com

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Angelflower
    February 26, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    oh this left a lot to the readers imagination.. I really liked this write.. you did such a wonderful job.. softly read yet passionate in it's short style.. Thank you very much for your entry, best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Toxic Stardust
    February 26, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    woa...provacative, and yet pretty good. I like it...
    Much Love and Keep Writing,
    Alicia Lynn


  • Amera gold member
    February 26, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    For some reason I knew you'd chose this picture prompt. LOL
    I really like the subtle hints in this poem. Great work!

    Love,
    Amera♥