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Your Castle

If
your
goal is to
live in a castle
someday, there may
be some dragons
you'll first
have to
slay.

Author notes

Go find your castle... Uncle Kev: Kevin Pace WordsDoMatter

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 11

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    A short but great piece!
    Thanks a lot for your entry here.
    We appreciate it and wish you all
    the best in our contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • jimek
    February 26

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    Is this it

    Is this your diamond poem?Did you hear Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words by Robert Frost, or Poetry is an orphan of silence the words never quite equal the experience behind them byCharles Simic


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 26
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    so very very true! Thanks Uncle Kev! I really loved the whisicality of this piece!


  • DesolatELifE
    February 26
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    I'm glad 'slay' is longer than 'if', or the the shape of this poem would have trouble standing up.