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(I wish) (I could) Love you because…


I wish to love you, for there is nothing I said I need to unsay
I could love you, because you understand me in some way

I wish to love you, but I can not simply do that for I am scared
I could love you, because heated passionate moments are shared
I could love you, because you are so calm and bring me rest
I wish to love you, but I am still not halfway back to being my best

I wish to love you, but there is still much clouding my mind
I could love you, because you are considerate and kind
I could love you, because loving is easier than being alone at times
I wish to love you, but there is still too much deflecting my rhymes

I wish to love you, but loving right now would be far too hard
I could love you, because you are one with a golden heart
I could love you, because you said I am now part of your world
I wish to love you, but my trust in anybody is still unfurled

I could love you, but not because I really wish I can
I wish to love you, but not until I find back who I am


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Note: This is just a simple poem from me. Jim Reeve’s “I love you because” just
inspired me in a different way to write this.

RIP JR

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  • righteousme
    April 3

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    I wish to love you, but not until I find back who I am ... that line was so true. you can not love another until you first love yourself. it is kind of the same concept ... you can not give yourself if you do not know your self ...
    thanks for your entry .. .


  • pranj
    March 18
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    to put it straight , I liked the idea of caution in love!