Like a river
Sustainer of every macromolecule
Within my Adamite inherence
Emanating snow white Unicorns
Scarlet fiery dragons
Propping ancient immortality
Through me
From the anabasis
Of life.
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I loved this piece. I really into all things dealing with fairies, unicorns or dragons. Have a great imagination, for those sort of things. I really loved these parts: Emanating snow white Unicorns... Scarlet fiery dragons. Thank you for sharing. Take care and have a great day.
Sandi
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What
fine imagery here & words that capture with their intensity! I'm going to have to go look 'anabasis' up. Oh...expedition! I love to learn new words...hope I can remember it! Nice work here.
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indeed awesome, I have to agree with BonnieQ about one fine poet.
Much love and peace to you,
Judy
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Flowing from God's Golden Throne
Okay, my darling brother, how did you know I collect Unicorns?
For such brevity of words, you captured my beliefs and yours, painted our world from beginning to almost its end. BUT! I wanted a picture of that river running across your Grecian property. Where is it? 
YOU are one fine poet!
Much love & hugs, SisBon
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I like the background you've chosen for this powerful write. Life blood is what I immediately thought, but even deeper-the essence of primordial beginnings, everpresent within but so often ignored or forgotten...But not by you, my friend, not by you. Well done, assignment or no. Love it. Peace, Rhonda
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I can sense the ancient mysteries here. Your write has a mythical and mystical ambience with that river if life flowing through the middle sustaining the energy propelled by its deep currents. Lovely write...alby
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awesome
this definitely brings a few things to mind...of course i may never know what you're truly going for here...either way...good write!
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