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The Savage

Tonight said the note the doors of heaven would open
Red roses, the finest champagne in acceptance I sent.

Night held firm, grew, I fumbled with the door lock
Lightly crossed the rug while you rested in dreams
Touching the warmth of your breath and sweet aroma
I managed to kiss you awake to a persistent seduction

Delayed moments stripped us to our natural grandeur
Rebellious curves as you play within the silky sheets
Sparkling eyes merge with mine to close in surrender
Lips as they make you tremble faint in silent whispers.

Tracing the soft-hearted adventure in moist tasteful bites
Areolas for they harden slip clustered in moans and burns
Palms as they cup to finger play my head in twisted needs
Reaching the heavenly doors limbs wide neatly quelled. 

I taste the bloom; feel hassled heart beats in body turmoil
Lifting you to cry out again and again in liberal raptures
While I shift to cross swords lashing my tongue to yours
Renewed pressure on your knees weakens your resistance

Targeted domain splits to the wet toiling, head long entry
Gorged; each move you make lodges me deeper in crushes
Captured struggle moves to seek your heightened surrender       
Holding my piercing armor to your random erotic attacks:

Few bounces in ruthless continuity break you into ecstasy 
I hear you whine craving for a restful moment in peace
But I have passions, to taste and delight in forbidden fruits
Merciless I penetrate the taboo ring to your joy and pain.

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  • XcPrincessB
    March 23
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    Hmmm

    Great write but not D/P.


  • AraLupus
    March 12

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    Wow, I really loved this poem. It was was hot, but also subtle, which I liked. Good write and good luck in the comp

  • passionate, deep, intoxicating and lovely good luck!


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 3
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    omg

    you are amazing. love reading this... good luck in the contest


  • Angelflower
    February 26

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    well good lord! this was really heat and passionate.. I really have no idea what to say..lol. But thank you very much for your entry, I truly enjoyed reading it.. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    February 26
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    Wow. Just... wow. Gorgeous!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~

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