Advil please
My body is wracked with pain
My hands, my feet, even my knees
Advil please
So that my aches will quickly ease
Before I am completely insane
Advil please
My body is wracked with pain
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Option 3.Advil Please.
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Thanks for entering my contest. This gave me a chuckle. I was actually considering taking some advil this morning as it has turned a cold spell and I am beginning to have some of that early morning cold weather achiness.
You have a small typo in the last line--wrabked sb wracked. It certainly did not interfere with my enjoyment of the write though. It is wonderful to view things in this life from the lighter side and thank goodness that a bit of advil does the trick. I know folks who are taking stuff for pain that seems to bring them a miriad of other issues. The wonderful world of pharmaceuticals is a scary looking place and it is good to know that I just may be able to make it through with the otc stuff
Thanks so much for the smile this morning.
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A nicely done triolet! You can really feel the agony with the plea for Advil. Well written. Good luck.
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Cute poem!
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