Both of us just standing in a hallway
But there's something blocking my way
And there's a path going to a secret secluded place
I'm sure it's a way to a world of empty space
Seeing it her way, I respected her too much
I would like to reserve my emotions, so I've never felt her touch
Seeing her in pain, I'd always rush to her aid
It seems I have a debt never to be repaid
I'm invisible to her just like the breezy air
I don't even know if she really cares
Even though she makes me stab myself so wild
She's still and forever, love of my life
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- The Love of Your Life by JustFallingApart.
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This was a good write, you did very well on this especialy if you did it in under 4 minutes. I liked this. Kinda sad, it wasn't particularly a happy poem but it was still a good write. Best of luck and hope all is well
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