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In the Eyes of Children

War ripped life's fabric
torn eyes bleed disillusion
innocence has fled

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a very inspirational prompt

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 6

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    Very different look at this prompt. I like it! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!